Saturday, October 27, 2007

D#10,HW#2 Annotated Bib X 2

The two sources I located this week both contain statistics related to Internet filtering. Both are fairly balanced, with no particular opinions expressed. The facts are presented and analyzed, and will help when writing my paper.

Richardson, Caroline R., Paul J. Resnick, Derek L. Hansen, Holly A. Derry, and Victoria J. Rideout. “Does Pornography-Blocking Software Block Access to Health Information on the Internet?(Abstract)” JAMA, The Journal of the American Medical Association 288.22 (11 Dec. 2002): 2887. Health Reference Center Academic. Gale. Mesa Community Coll., Mesa, AZ. 27 Oct. 2007 < http://ejournals.ebsco.com.ezp.mc.maricopa.edu/direct.asp?ArticleID=7VGNQRC8W40V8Y5970VQ >.

This article presents the results of a controlled test of Internet access to health information through different levels of filtering or blocking. The statistics are very clear, and the conclusions reached by the authors will be useful when refuting objections to my thesis. The article is not available online in full-text, but I will try to locate it when I am back on campus.

Wolak, Janis, Kimberly Mitchell, and David Finkelhor. "Unwanted and Wanted Exposure to Online Pornography in a National Sample of Youth Internet Users.(Survey)." Pediatrics 119.2 (Feb. 2007): 247(11). Health Reference Center Academic. Gale. Mesa Community Coll., Mesa, AZ. 27 Oct. 2007
< http://find.galegroup.com.ezp.mc.maricopa.edu/itx/start.do?prodId=HRCA>.

The results of a telephone survey conducted in 2005 are presented and analyzed in this article. Several mental health conditions identified in teens and associated with online pornography viewing are explored. The survey results are separated into groups according to the level of exposure the teens admitted. The authors are employed by the Crimes Against Children Resource Center at the University of New Hampshire. The statistics will help me explain the results of unfiltered Internet access.

D#10,HW#1 Reading reflection

The chapter readings this week from Everything's an Argument helped me identify the style I will be using in my WP#3. My thesis is in the form of a proposal, and chapter 11 covered it very well. The "Guide to writing a proposal" on pages 346-350 outlines each of the steps I will need to take. I enjoyed reading all of the sample essays, especially the tongue-in-cheek style of P.J. O'Rourke in his "Mass Transit Hysteria." I try to find humor in things whenever possible, and it is nice to be able to lighten up some subjects that might otherwise be heavy and dry.
The websites I reviewed will assist me in finalizing a thesis statement, and constructing the first draft of my research essay. I forgot that Devon said he would have some samples for us to look at. I meant to ask him about that during class Thursday. Hope he will post something online at least.

Thursday, October 25, 2007

D#9,HW#7 Deadline reflection

This must have been a tough week for everyone...not too many posts yet.
All of the review and homework this week helped me organize my research. Creating the paper for WP#3 next week will be easier than any other paper I have done. Learning how to do each step will help me with all future writing. Even though it was a royal pain sometimes, it was worth learning to do it correctly.
I commented on the following Toulmin outlines:
"D#9, HW#4, Toulmin Outline" Coralee
"D9HW4 Out-line" Steph

D#9,HW#6 Outline

Internet Filtering

Thesis: Federal laws governing the use of Internet filtering software in libraries need to be strengthened.

I. Introduction

II. What is Internet filtering?

A. Technology needed

B. Software/How it works

1. Filtering

2. Blocking

C. Cost to implement

D. Results/Limitations

III. Why filter?

A. Inappropriate content

B. Parent/Patron demand

IV. Current Laws

A. History

B. Challenges

C. Who must comply?

1. Public libraries

2. School libraries

V. Filtering statistics

A. Survey results

1. Pro-filtering organizations

2. Anti-filtering organizations

B. Opinions of information professionals/librarians

C. Manufacturer claims

VI. Recommended solutions

A. Changes to laws

B. Additional safeguards

VII. Conclusion

D#9,HW#5 Clustering

D#9,HW#5 Clustering

Personally, I don’t like mapping or clustering my information. I do much better putting it in a logical outline form. I do that by organizing my sources according to content. For this research, I have sections pertaining to: the laws and challenges to the laws; the filtering software and how it works; positions held by different groups; opinions and facts from library and user surveys; and possible solutions. Several of these clusters will be broken down further into separate sections, such as specific filtering options for each type of software. The next outline I post will reflect my groupings.

D#9,HW#4 Toulmin outline

For some reason, the formatting doesn't want to post right. I will try one more time...

Claim/Thesis: Federal laws governing the use of Internet filtering software in libraries need to be strengthened.

I. Reason 1: Filtering is not mandated for all libraries
A. (Warrant) Law should be consistent for all public and school libraries
B. (Evidence) Some libraries are completely exempt from the laws
C. (Evidence) Some libraries choose to refuse funding that would require compliance with the law
D. (Evidence) Some libraries filter more content than is required by law
II. Reason 2: Filtering results in reduced availability of information
A. (Warrant) Internet searches should produce valuable results
B. (Evidence) Filters block legitimate sites with no review
C. (Evidence) Filtering decisions are made by technicians, not information professionals
III. Reason 3: Filtering is not protecting library users
A. (Warrant) Library users want reliable protection from inappropriate Internet content
B. (Evidence) Library users may know how to circumvent filtering technology
C. (Evidence) Library users can request that filtering be turned off without stating the reason
D. (Evidence) Laws only require filters to prevent access to images, not text
E. (Evidence) Inappropriate sites are created too rapidly for filters to be effective
IV. Objection: The Supreme Court ruled that current law is constitutional
A. (Refutation) The ruling was a majority opinion, not unanimous
B. (Refutation) Technology has improved considerably since the original law was passed

The tabs entered don't seem to want to hold from creation point to posting. Oh well...have to move on.

Monday, October 22, 2007

D#9,HW#3 WP2 Reflection

First, I spent the entire weekend completing this writing project. I went back through each source chosen for my draft, and evaluated them for their ultimate value to my research. Some of them I decided to eliminate from the final WP#2, mainly because other sources had the same information. The ones I used in the final represented all of the points of view relevant to my topic. I also modified each annotation to include all of the required information, trying to get close to the 150 words that Devon asked for. Going through this process really made me think about my thesis, and I began to recognize things that I could use as claims and warrants. Now I can organize the sources and information they contain into a coherent outline.
One thing I tried to improve in the writing project was my ability to format citations correctly. The web sites and Bedford Researcher were more helpful to me than the MLA Handbook. If I had not had to do MLA format in previous writing assignments, I would have been in real trouble. I didn't anticipate the "self-instruction" required for this class, but so far I am managing. Thank goodness for the peer review on the writing projects.

D#9,HW#2 Turnitin

I sent it off to the land of Turnitin. That is a big relief for the week. I only shared the final with Devon, so I will post a copy here. The URLs don't show up, but they are ok on my final document. I am just too tired to mess with it any more.

Kathy Lacey

WP#2 Final
Eng 102-7891

22 Oct. 2007

Internet Filtering: An Annotated Bibliography


Internet filtering software has been in use for many years. The Children's Internet Protection Act (CIPA) requires some libraries to install filtering software (filters) on any computers designated for public use. Advocates of free access to information are decidedly against the use of filters, while parents and others want filters to prevent accidental viewing of inappropriate images and text. This controversy has led to court challenges as well as numerous complaints in various libraries. The issue continues to be widely discussed among library professionals, especially in schools. Media Specialists in the schools are challenged to provide adequate research tools for students, while ensuring that students are protected from pornography, violence, and foul or hateful language. Filters are designed to address the potential problem by blocking access to certain Web sites or images. The effectiveness of filtering software and the laws governing the use of that software are points of controversy. Current laws only pertain to certain libraries, and do not adequately address the problem. The laws need to be changed to better reflect current technology. The following sources provide information related to the issue.

Bell, Mary Ann. "The Elephant in the Room: School Districts Nationwide Are Voluntarily Filtering the Filters--And No One Is Talking About It." School Library Journal 53.1 (2007). ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 .

Informal surveys conducted by the author are the basis of this article. Her surveys were conducted in 2006, and the participants were subscribers to an online discussion group for media specialists. The issue centers on Internet access policies in school districts across the United States. Specific examples of some policies are detailed, along with the results of the enforcement of those policies. The author is an associate professor at a Texas university, and her views reflect her experience. Her argument is not against filtering per se, but rather the censorship happening in school districts through the use of filtering and blocking techniques. She emphasizes the importance of information literacy and the ability to apply effective online search methods. The article concludes with six steps that libraries can take to deal with the issue of filtering. The information will help me document some specific instances of the research process being hindered by filtering software.

Bocher, Bob. "A CIPA Toolkit." Library Journal 128.13 (2003): 36-37. Education Research Complete. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib. 17 Sept. 2007 .

This article addresses a variety of issues associated with the Supreme Court ruling in 2003, which determined that the filtering requirements of CIPA are constitutional. Specific programs covered by the ruling are explained, and key issues of each aspect are identified. One section emphasizes the handling of unblocking requests made by adult patrons. Another section deals with possible actions against a library for perceived filter failure, and the handling of complaints through the use of written library policies. The author is a technology consultant for the Wisconsin Department of Public Instruction, State Division for Libraries, Technology, and Community Learning, and served as Chief Council of the State School Officers’ State E-Rate Coordinators’ Alliance. The information helped me understand the scope of the CIPA ruling and its effect on many public libraries. The specific details will help me explain the different ways that libraries choose to comply with the requirements, and the associated consequences of non-compliance.

Carson, Bryan. The Law of Libraries and Archives. Lanham, MD: Scarecrow Press, 2007. 247-260.

This book contains a chapter pertaining to the provisions of the CIPA, the court challenge by the American Library Association (ALA), and the subsequent Supreme Court decision. The result of the ruling is summarized, along with an explanation of the plurality opinion that determined that ruling. The author presents his interpretation along with actual text from the written opinion submitted by each Supreme Court Justice. Key elements of each opinion help explain the final ruling. There is also a section that expresses the need for library policies that cover all aspects of filtering, including the requests from adult patrons to unblock access or turn filtering off. The author is an associate professor at Western Kentucky University, a member of the bar, and Coordinator of Reference and Instructional Services for their Library Media Education Program. The information will provide a perspective on the legal ramifications of filtering, as well as stressing the importance of having thorough written policies covering the use and requests for non-use of filters.

Faulkner, Marcel. "Filter Schmilter: Libraries and Internet Filtering Software." WebJunction. 6 Dec. 2006. Arizona State Library, Archives and Public Records. 5 Dec. 2007 .

The first section of this article gives a brief summary of the Internet and its increasing importance as a research tool in schools and libraries. Another section reviews the traditional role of librarians in the selection of materials deemed appropriate for the collection. The terms “filtering” and “blocking” are explained, as well as some of the strengths and weaknesses of each. Statistics are presented that detail the results of tests conducted to evaluate the level of effectiveness of different software, most recently in 2005. The last half of the article addresses some arguments against filtering, and stresses freedom of access to information. The author concludes that libraries should resist pressure to implement filtering unless required by law. He is a Librarian Assistant at Hamilton Public Library in Hamilton, Ontario. The article is written for library professionals in Canada and the United States. The information will be used to present evidence about the ineffectiveness of current filtering laws.

Heins, Marjorie, Christina Cho, and Ariel Feldman. "Internet Filters: A Public Policy Report." 2nd ed. 2006. Brennan Center for Justice at NYU School of Law. 5 Oct. 2007 .

This lengthy report is an updated version of a 2001 publication written as a summary of the major studies of filtering effectiveness conducted up to that time. The 2006 edition includes results of more recent surveys and more background information on all aspects of the filtering debate. The majority of the statistics presented deal with over blocking and under blocking by the most prominent filtering software applications. The conclusions reached by the authors, based on all of the studies they reference, point to the overall failure of filtering performance. Recommendations are offered to help libraries increase safe use of the Internet while complying with CIPA requirements. The authors work for the Free Expression Policy Project, a research and advocacy group that is now part of the Brennan Center for Justice at the New York University (NYU) School of Law. The bias of the authors against filtering is evident, but the detailed examples will provide further evidence in support of my thesis.

Johnson, Doug. "Maintaining Intellectual Freedom in a Filtered World." Learning and Leading with Technology 32.8 (2005): 39. ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 .

This article presents a logical process employed in a Minnesota school district to determine the best way to implement Internet filtering while protecting the intellectual freedom of the staff and students. The author describes his reservations and fears associated with blocking of Internet access to some sites. He also lists ways that students can make the filters ineffective. Four main courses of action are described to minimize problems associated with student online access, concluding with a list of steps that teachers and library staff can take to ensure proper use of the Internet. The author is Director of Media and Technology for the Mankato (Minnesota) Area Public Schools, and serves on the Board of Directors for the International Society for Technology in Education (ISTE). The rational approach to filtering he describes best mirrors my own feelings on the issue, and will be used as evidence in support of my position.

"Libraries Should Use Software Filters to Censor Internet Pornography." Contemporary Issues Companion: Censorship (2004). Kate Burns. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 2004. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Thomson Gale. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 17 Sept. 2007 <http://find.galegroup.com.ezp.mc.maricopa.edu/ovrc/infomark.do?&contentSet=GSRC&type=retrieve&tabID=T010&prodId=OVRC&docId=EJ3010266212&source=gale&srcprod=OVRC&userGroupName=mcc_mesa&version=1.0>.

The contents of this article were excerpted from a speech given by Robert Peters in 2003. Peters was speaking as the president of Morality in Media, a watchdog organization that fights obscenity and graphic violence on the Internet. One section discusses the traditional role of librarians in the selection of materials for libraries. Another part covers tactics pornographers use to circumvent filtering applications. Several anti-filtering arguments are addressed, and the author offers a refutation of each one. The author concludes that filtering is essential, even with its flaws. The information will be useful in explaining the sentiments of groups seeking to expand the use of filtering in libraries and schools, and the pro-filtering stance in general. The author wrote the article before CIPA was passed, but the information is still fairly accurate and reflects current opinion on the issue.

Meeder, Rebecca. "Access Denied: Internet Filtering Software in K-12 Classrooms." TechTrends: Linking Research & Practice to Improve Learning 49.6 (2005): 56-78. Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 12 Sept. 2007 .

Teaching students to use technology responsibly is the recommendation of this author. Filtering software is explained, with emphasis on computer access in K-12 schools. Typical problems with filtering technology are discussed, including improper blocking of valuable research and educational sites. The balance of the article elaborates on things that educators can do to help students use the Internet, with filtering software in place, to conduct research. Five steps are suggested to assist teachers and technology staff members in monitoring student access. The author was a graduate assistant at the University of Hawaii when the article was published, and was working toward a Master’s degree in the educational technology program. The information is presented in a well-balanced way, with no obvious bias. It will help me present the point of view of educators in the filtering debate, as well as some strategies for teaching safe Internet use in schools.

Smith, Mark. Neal-Schuman Internet Policy Handbook for Libraries. New York: Neal-Schuman, 1999. 75-98.

This book devotes a chapter to the positive and negative aspects of filtering. The information presented is meant to provide beneficial details for library staff members facing a decision about whether or not to filter their Internet access. There is good coverage of the ALA position and policy statements regarding filtering, and a brief reference to anti-obscenity statutes. The author presents a thorough explanation of the difference between material selection and content filtering in libraries. Another section of the chapter is devoted to the variety of choices available concerning filtering, as well as the way most of the software operates and the major vendors. Several alternatives to filtering are explained, accompanied by sample library policy statements. The final part of the chapter offers five case histories that will help me describe types of challenges that occur as a result of filtering or not filtering. The bias-free presentation of the material in this book will allow me to offer facts and statements that pertain to both sides of the filtering debate.

Looking at the different perspectives on this issue has helped me to understand the strong positions held by segments of the population that I do not ordinarily deal with on a regular basis. Some groups that I thought would be very much against filtering seem to understand the need to protect children, and have found ways to work around the filtering requirements. Much of the research has made me aware of the variety of software programs in use, and the approaches taken by different libraries to address this issue. As I develop the outline for the research paper, I may need to locate additional sources for the pro-filtering component. The anti-filtering literature is abundant, with special insight for the school aspect. The resources located will help to present the information in an interesting (and persuasive) manner for the audience.

Saturday, October 20, 2007

D#9,HW#1 Reading Reflection

The chapter readings this week helped me identify the type of argument to use in my research paper. Chapter 7 in ...Argument is a very thorough explanation of factual arguments. I am fairly cynical, so I tend to question the way facts are presented when I read them (p.182-4). The steps outlined for developing factual arguments are very detailed, and the "Getting and Giving Response" section (p.198) of the "Guide to writing an argument of fact" is a good resource to refer to later on.
I didn't catch the typo last week, and read chapter 8 then. This week I read chapter 9 on evaluations, and found the guide on pages 269-273 especially useful. The majority of my research will be presented using this style.
Chapter 17 is one of the better sections of the book. Fallacy is predominant in many of the advertising claims, political ads, and passionate speeches abundant in media today. Some people are highly susceptible to this professional tactic, and others demand to know the basis for claims made. The last topic in the chapter is faulty analogies. That is one of my pet peeves, and when they are used, it makes me tend to disregard the source completely.
The info in Chapter 11 of Bedford will be essential when developing the outlines for HW#s 4, 5, and 6. I know the next step for me is to organize all of my sources according to the Toulmin method.
Finally, the websites this week were good for review, and will help me construct effective outlines.

Thursday, October 18, 2007

D#8,HW#6 Deadline Reflection

All of the readings and exercises this week helped me develop better ideas about the organization of my final researched argument. Some of the frustration I encountered with formats in Google Documents was cleared up through trial and error. I think I will be able to format my final works cited page correctly.
I commented on the following blogs:

"Deadline #8, HW #4, The Case against Coldplay" Camille

"Deadline #8 HW #1 Reading Reflection" Justin

"D#8, HW#3, Peer Review Reflection" Coralee

"D#8, HW#4, Analyze Jon Pareles's Essay" Mike

"D#8, HW#6, Deadline Reflection" Coralee

D#8,HW#5 Grammar Assignment

This week I finally had a chance to look at the Grammar Girl site. I wish I could get it to work on my dial-up. The two concepts I reviewed were:

Which Versus That

http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/which-versus-that.aspx

Between Versus Among

http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/between-versus-among.aspx

I reviewed several papers that I have submitted. I made the following corrections:

Anything we do which uses technology to enrich the lesson is better received, and the information is retained longer than with more traditional activities.

Corrected: Anything we do that uses…

I entered the information from the various MARC records into spreadsheets, which made it easier to find differences between the entries for each title. (Correct usage)

Youth Library services that require new technology skills are playing an increasing role in requirements for candidates seeking employment at all levels. (Correct usage)

Monday, October 15, 2007

D#8,HW#4 Essay Analysis

Kathy Lacey

  • Rhetorical Situation

The purpose of the essay by Jon Pareles about the band Coldplay is to offer a critical analysis of the lyrics and music they produce, and reasons for his unfavorable opinion of them. The publication of the essay coincides with the release of a new album by the band. Pareles writes as a music critic for The New York Times, which helps us understand his purpose as expressive, informative, analytical, and persuasive. In the context of respected music critic, Pareles expresses his opinion, informs readers with clear descriptions, analyzes the music, lyrics, and even motives of band members, and attempts to persuade readers to agree with his views. This context is important—the same essay by an unknown author would have much less impact on readers. Those readers include his intended audience, consisting of people involved in the music and recording industry, fans (and foes) of popular music, and followers of Coldplay anticipating the new release. Other readers are part of the unintended audience, such as students reading for an assignment, or casual readers of the newspaper attracted to the essay by the title. The intended audience recognizes the author’s credentials, and understands the terminology used to convey the author’s opinion about the topic. The unintended audience may only read the first few paragraphs.

  • Thesis

The thesis of the argument is that Coldplay is “the most insufferable band of the decade.” The reasons given include the voice of band member Chris Martin and the lyrics. The “evidence” given to support the author’s claims is presented as partial lyrics of old and new releases. Pareles offers his opinion of those lyrics, stating, “…the lyrics can make me wish I didn’t understand English.” Martin’s singing is described as “…a sound somewhere between a yodel and a hiccup.”

  • Ethos, Pathos, and Logos

The author engages in ethos in the first paragraph of the essay, identifying different character traits (self-pity, striving for grandeur, male sensitivity) as influential factors in songwriting. Pathos is used in praise of the band: “The band proffers melodies as imposing as Romanesque architecture, solid and symmetrical.” This suggests a grand scale, as does “…sonic splendor…” Pathos is also used to offer criticism: “When he moans his verses, Mr. Martin can sound so sorry for himself that there’s hardly room to sympathize for him…” Facts (logos) are limited to a few stated numbers, such as “…third album” and “20 million albums worldwide.”

  • Objections

The author acknowledges that Coldplay has “worldwide popularity” and is “admired by everyone—everyone except me.” He refutes popular opinion by first identifying great attributes of the band and then citing specific lyrics or music that seem to disappoint him, as well as the reason for his displeasure: “Coldplay’s countless fans seem to take comfort…” “Me, I hear a passive-aggressive blowhard…”

I am not familiar with the music of Coldplay, and I had never read a column by Mr. Pareles. As a member of the unintended audience, I was not convinced that this band is “insufferable.” The evidence was not sufficient to do any more than make me curious enough to seek out some of Coldplay’s music and listen for myself.

D#8,HW#3 Peer Review Reflection

Looking at the other bibliographies was very helpful this week. I tried to answer the peer review questions on p.34 of the syllabus for each draft. Going over each point there, and reviewing the bulleted points in the directions for WP#2 made me aware of problem areas in my own draft. I know I need to add to the annotations to make them more useful, and align them flush left.
I have been told different things about spacing for annotated bibliographies, so I looked in The MLA Handbook and The Bedford Researcher. Figure 4.6 on p.59 of Bedford shows that the citations should be bolder type, first line flush left and additional lines indented five spaces, and annotations all flush left. The MLA Handbook, sixth edition, p.145 says, "Double-space the entire list, both between and within entries." That is how I will construct by final WP#2.

D#8,HW#2 Peer Reviews

I added peer review comments to the following WP#2 drafts:
7891 Winter - WP #2 DRAFT

Zucker - eng102 7891 - wp2 draft

Sunday, October 14, 2007

D#8,HW#1 Reading Reflection

Chapter 5 explains rhetorical analysis very well. The bulleted points on p. 105 are helpful when attempting to analyze an essay. There is a quick review of pathos, ethos, and logos. The ethos section on p. 113 has a great line: "Language that's hot and extreme can mark a writer as either passionate or loony." Choice of words in an argument is extremely important. Beginning on page 129 there is also a great "Guide to writing a rhetorical analysis" to help with HW#4 this week.
Chapter 6 gives good definitions of everything needed for Toulmin arguments and analysis, with an outline on p. 164. "What Toulmin Teaches" on pages 169-70 sums it all up.
Chapter 8 introduces arguments of definition, and shows how to formulate a claim and match it to a specific definition. "Key Features of Definitional Arguments" on p. 233 describes six basic parts that should be included in a written argument.
The webpages listed this week are great resources for learning how to complete the steps necessary for writing an argumentative essay. Both the Paradigm and OWL sites have information about thesis statements, developing paragraphs, outlining, prewriting, introductions, and conclusions. I also reviewed the Rodrigo webpages covering rhetorical situations, which helped me with HW#4.

Thursday, October 11, 2007

D#7,HW#5 Deadline reflection

Going back through my sources this week (and reading Devon's comments on my WP#1) helped me realize that I had narrowed my topic a little too much in the final question. I will need to revise it for WP3. I have learned many things about Internet filtering, and can use the information for our Technology Policy where I work. It has been challenging to keep up with all of the deadlines, but it is getting easier.
I commented on the following blogs this week:
"D#7, HW#1, Reading Reflection" Coralee
"Deadline #7 HW #1 Reading Reflection" Justin
"Deadline #7 HW #3 WP #2 Draft" Justin
"D7HW2 Annotated Bibliography draft" Stephann
"D#7, HW#3, Draft WP#2" Mike

Wednesday, October 10, 2007

D#7,HW#4 Turnitin

I submitted my draft to turnitin.com, receipt ID# 52788721.
Kathy

D#7,HW#3 WP#2 Draft

Internet Filtering
Annotated Bibliography


Internet filtering software has been in use for many years. The law requires some libraries to install filters on any computers designated for public use. Advocates of free access to information are decidedly against the use of filters, while parents and others want filters to prevent children from viewing inappropriate images and text. This controversy has led to court challenges as well as numerous complaints in various libraries. The research potential is enhanced by the strong feelings of the groups involved. The issue continues to be widely discussed among library professionals, especially in schools. Media Specialists in the schools are challenged to provide adequate research tools for students, while ensuring that students are protected from pornography, violence, and foul or hateful language. Filters are designed to address the potential problem by blocking access to certain Web sites or images. The following sources provide information related to the issue.

Bell, Mary Ann. "The Elephant in the Room: School Districts Nationwide Are Voluntarily Filtering the Filters--And No One Is Talking about It." School Library Journal 53.1 (2007). ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 <http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ755241&site=ehost-live>.

The author summarizes the results of an informal survey she conducted in 2006. She gives some specific examples of filter-related problems, and offers six ways to approach the issue. As an associate professor at a university, she has a good background to write about the topic.

Bocher, Bob. "A CIPA Toolkit." Library Journal 128.13 (2003): 36-37. Education Research Complete. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib. 17 Sept. 2007 <http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ehh&AN=10566884&site=ehost-live>.

This article answers many questions about filtering requirements under CIPA. I located it using the Education Research Complete database through MCC. Most of the information is related to a Supreme Court ruling, and the effect it had on libraries. The author’s credentials qualify him as a reliable source for this topic. The article will help me identify those libraries that are affected by the law.

Carson, Bryan. The Law of Libraries and Archives. Lanham, MD: Scarecrow Press, 2007.

There is a chapter in this book that goes into detail about the Children’s Internet Protection Act (CIPA) and the legal rulings and opinions that pertain to it. The opinions for each of the Supreme Court justices are given, along with explanations for their interpretations. This will be very helpful to me when I explain the background of my thesis and research question. The book also reviews the Act and the way it affects all public libraries.

Faulkner, Marcel. "Filter Schmilter: Libraries and Internet Filtering Software." WebJunction. 6 Dec. 2006. Arizona State Library, Archives and Public Records. 5 Dec. 2007 <http://az.webjunction.org/do/DisplayContent?id=14621>.

This extensive article was published before the CIPA rulings took effect. It has a section dealing with school libraries, and goes into great depth on the background, current situation, and the outlook for filtering. There are lists of resources and contact information for organizations involved in the issue.

"Government Efforts to Protect Children from Online Pornography Are Ineffective." Current Controversies: The Information Age (2003). Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Thomson Gale. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 17 Sept. 2007 <http://find.galegroup.com.ezp.mc.maricopa.edu/ovrc/infomark.do?&contentSet=GSRC&type=retrieve&tabID=T010&prodId=OVRC&docId=EJ3010298226&source=gale&srcprod=OVRC&userGroupName=mcc_mesa&version=1.0>.

This article from Opposing Viewpoints goes into great detail about many of the shortcomings of Internet filtering software. The author is a teacher, and has strong feelings about the issue. His points are valid, and he offers an extensive list of resources for more information.

Heins, Marjorie, Christina Cho, and Ariel Feldman. "Internet Filters: A Public Policy Report." Second ed. 2006. Brennan Center for Justice at NYU School of Law. 5 Oct. 2007 <http://www.fepproject.org/policyreports/filters2.pdf>.

This lengthy report is an extremely thorough exploration of Internet filtering software and its use. The authors work for the Free Expression Policy Project, and are decidedly against the use of filters. They offer extensive documentation of court opinions, and numerous examples of ineffective blocking performed by filters. Seven actions are recommended for libraries to promote safe Internet use while complying with current law.

Johnson, Doug. "Maintaining Intellectual Freedom in a Filtered World." Learning and Leading with Technology 32.8 (2005): 39. ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 <http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ697382&site=ehost-live>.

This article addresses the challenges encountered with different levels of filtering. The respected author outlines the process used for determining what should be blocked to comply with the provisions of the law. He also identifies eight things that teachers and media specialists can do to facilitate proper Internet use in schools.

Jost, Kenneth. "Libraries and the Internet." The CQ Researcher 11.21 (2001): 465-88. CQ Researcher. CQ Press. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib. 2 Sept. 2007 <http://library.cqpress.com/cqresearcher/cqresrre2001060100>.

Subjects covered in this report include filtering and blocking of the Internet in public and school libraries, the Children’s Internet Protection Act (CIPA), and the strong opposition by members of the American Library Association (ALA).

Kravitz, Nancy. Censorship and the School Library Media Center. Libraries Unlimited Professional Guides in School Librarianship. Westport, Conn.: Libraries Unlimited, 2002.

As the title states, this book deals mainly with censorship. There is a section dealing with electronic resources that gives basic information about filtering. It lists the four main filtering options for schools, and has a full page of products available that have been reviewed by Consumer Reports. There are numerous links given for Internet Service Providers and Alternate Resources reprinted from Smartparent.com. Many of these links will be useful for my research.

"Libraries Should Use Software Filters to Censor Internet Pornography." Contemporary Issues Companion: Censorship (2004). Kate Burns. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 2004. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Thomson Gale. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 17 Sept. 2007 <http://find.galegroup.com.ezp.mc.maricopa.edu/ovrc/infomark.do?&contentSet=GSRC&type=retrieve&tabID=T010&prodId=OVRC&docId=EJ3010266212&source=gale&srcprod=OVRC&userGroupName=mcc_mesa&version=1.0>.

This article is presented by Opposing Viewpoints, and the author has a strong bias toward filtering. He was the president of Morality in Media when the article was written. There are strong assertions having to do with children’s exposure to pornography, but not many facts to back them up. It gives me a good idea about the opinions of the pro-filtering element of society.

McCarthy, David. "Internet Filtering for Schools - An Update." Media & Methods 41.6 (2005): 9-11. Education Research Complete. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 12 Sept. 2007 <http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ehh&AN=17539411&site=ehost-live>.

The article describes ways a filter can be used, and explains “Content Web Filtering.” It also gives information about six filtering software products. It will help me explain how filtering software operates, and some of its unique features.

Meeder, Rebecca. "Access Denied: Internet Filtering Software in K-12 Classrooms." TechTrends: Linking Research & Practice to Improve Learning 49.6 (2005): 56-78. Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll., Paul A. Elsner Lib., Mesa, AZ. 12 Sept. 2007 .

This article contains good information about teacher responses to filtering and its effect on research. It has a good bibliography, and the author worked with technology and online courseware for a university. It will help me understand the teacher point of view.

Smith, Mark. Neal-Schuman Internet Policy Handbook for Libraries. New York: Neal-Schuman, 1999. 75-98.

This book devotes an entire chapter to the pros and cons of filtering. The author includes information about relevant documents and rulings, and covers some of the choices available as far as filtering decisions go. There is a section detailing how the various software packages work, and a list of some of the major vendors. One very interesting part covers what some libraries choose to do as an alternative to filtering.

Looking at the different perspectives on this issue has helped me to understand the strong positions held by segments of the population that I do not ordinarily deal with on a regular basis. Much of the research has made me aware of the variety of software programs in use, and the approaches taken by different libraries to address this issue. As I develop the outline for the research paper, I may need to locate additional sources for the pro-filtering component. The anti-filtering literature is abundant, with special insight for the school aspect. I hope I can present the information in an interesting (and persuasive) manner for the audience.

Monday, October 8, 2007

D#7,HW#2 Annotated Bib X 3

This week I tried to find some sources I hadn't looked at yet. One was found using the MCC database, one was a link from a source on WilsonWeb, a Phoenix Public Library database, and the other was found on the ACLU site, searching for "CIPA."

Barack, Lauren. "Filters Impede Learning." School Library Journal 51.12 (2005): 24-24. Education Research Complete. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll. Lib., Mesa, AZ. 12 Sept. 2007 < http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ehh&AN=19170825&site=ehost-live >.

This brief article explains the results of a survey conducted by a librarian for her Ph. D. dissertation. There are a few good examples, but the research deals primarily with high school students. The survey author offers ideas to help minimize filtering problems.

Hansen, Chris, and Ann Beeson. "Library Filtering After US v. ALA: What Does it All Mean and What Should We Do." American Civil Liberties Union. 1 Aug. 2003. ACLU. 5 Oct. 2007 < http://www.aclu.org/privacy/speech/14938res20030801.html >.

This memorandum was written after the Supreme Court issued a ruling concerning filtering. It offers seven recommended steps for libraries to take, as well as interpretations of key points of The Children’s Internet Protection Act (CIPA). There are also links to other sources of information written specifically about the ruling.

Heins, Marjorie, Christina Cho, and Ariel Feldman. "Internet Filters: A Public Policy Report." Second ed. 2006. Brennan Center for Justice at NYU School of Law. 5 Oct. 2007 < http://www.fepproject.org/policyreports/filters2.pdf >.

This lengthy report is an extremely thorough exploration of Internet filtering software and its use. The authors work for the Free Expression Policy Project, and are decidedly against the use of filters. They offer extensive documentation of court opinions, and numerous examples of ineffective blocking performed by filters. Seven actions are recommended for libraries to promote safe Internet use while complying with current law.

It is sure frustrating to lose all of the formatting when pasting into this blog!


Friday, October 5, 2007

D#7,HW#1 Reading Reflection

Several examples came to mind as I read the chapters this week. Watching major league sporting events on TV can result in being exposed to arguments in the form of commercials. The companies that advertise during games go to the top marketing firms in the country in an attempt to persuade us to buy their products. Many of these commercials appeal to our emotions (Pathos). Political commercials obviously attempt to convince us of the high moral character of particular candidates (Ethos). Some of us are good at using these appeals when we argue a conviction or attempt to persuade someone else to believe as we do. Much of what we have learned and practiced so far in this class will help us make our case in the final researched argument we present. The entire rhetorical situation we have identified should help us outline our facts, motivations, audience, and conclusions.

Thursday, October 4, 2007

D#6,HW#8 Deadline Reflection

The readings and exercises this week helped me to improve my skills in finding and citing sources, properly organizing my writing, and using feedback to make revisions. I am getting better at using the Bedford Bibliographer online tool to organize my sources. It lets you add annotations and source evaluations for each entry. It will definitely help me compose my WP#2 draft for Deadline 7 next week. I am looking forward to seeing the other bibliographies on Google Documents, too.
I commented on the following posts this week:
"D6, HW3, Writing Reflection" Jared
"D6HW3 Writing Project Reflection" Stephann
"D#6, HW#1, Reading Reflection" Mike
"D#6, HW#1, Reading Reflection" Coralee
"D6, HW4, Annotated Bibliography" Jared
Enjoy the weekend!
Kathy

Tuesday, October 2, 2007

D#6,HW#7 Grammar

To review some grammar elements that I have trouble with, I went to the Paradigm site and read through the "Basic Punctuation" pages. I completed two activities: 4.21 Apostrophes and 4.22 Punctuation. Then I reviewed several of my blog postings, looking at the punctuation. Finally, I made revisions to my WP#1 Draft before submitting it to turnitin.com. Those revisions included peer recommendations, removal of some personal pronouns, and modification of some transitional sentences.

D#6,HW#6 Evaluate

Johnson, Doug. "Maintaining Intellectual Freedom in a Filtered World." Learning and Leading with Technology 32.8 (2005): 39. ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll. Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ697382&site=ehost-live
Using the criteria on pages 530-534 of Everything's An Argument, I evaluated the journal article cited above. The information is relevant to my topic, presenting a detailed explanation of a filtering decision. The author writes books and articles about technology and media, serves as director of media and technology for the Mankato Area Public Schools, and is a member of the board of directors of the International Society for Technology in Education (ISTE). He understands the need for filtering, but presents a very balanced approach to using the technology in schools. The journal that published the article is Learning and Leading with Technology. The ISTE Web page describes it as "...a primarily practioner-submitted magazine..." with articles that are "editorially reviewed." The publication began in September of 1995, and the organization is respected in the fields of education and technology. The article was written over two years ago, but the information is still accurate. The ideas presented are specific to my research and my intended audience, but not too detailed or specialized to be understood. The article is long enough to provide adequate details, and is readily accessible. I could not identify any omissions.

D#6,HW#5 Evidence

The majority of the evidence I intend to use will be secondhand. Library books and database articles that I have located contain facts and statistics that support my argument. Professional Web sites have articles or passages written by recognized authorities, as well as testimony from experts. Some journal articles give the results of surveys conducted about my topic, and a few have data that can be presented in the form of graphs or charts.
If time permits, I will conduct a survey of elementary school teachers and parents to obtain firsthand evidence that could be used in my research project.

Monday, October 1, 2007

D#6,HW#4 Annotated Bib X 3

All of my sources this week were located using the MCC online databases. Two were found using the ERIC database, and one was on Ebrary.

Bell, Mary Ann. "The Elephant in the Room: School Districts Nationwide Are Voluntarily Filtering the Filters--And No One Is Talking about It." School Library Journal 53.1 (2007). ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll. Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 < http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ755241&site=ehost-live >.

The author summarizes the results of an informal survey she conducted in 2006. She gives some specific examples of filter-related problems, and offers six ways to approach the issue. As an associate professor at a university, she has a good background to write about the topic.

Conn, Kathleen. Internet and the Law : What Educators Need to Know. Alexandria, VA: Association for Supervision & Curriculum Development, 2002. Ebrary. 2002. Mesa Community Coll. Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 < http://site.ebrary.com.ezp.mc.maricopa.edu/lib/mesa/Doc?id=10044788&ppg=128 >.

The author of this book is a lawyer, working as a public school administrator. There have been court rulings issued since this book was published, but most of the information is still relevant. An appendix contains good explanations about filtering and compliance with current law.

Johnson, Doug. "Maintaining Intellectual Freedom in a Filtered World." Learning and Leading with Technology 32.8 (2005): 39. ERIC. EBSCO. Mesa Community Coll. Lib., Mesa, AZ. 1 Oct. 2007 < http://ezp.mc.maricopa.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ697382&site=ehost-live >.

This article addresses the challenges encountered with different levels of filtering. The respected author outlines the process used for determining what should be blocked to comply with the provisions of the law. He also identifies eight things that teachers and media specialists can do to facilitate proper Internet use in schools.


D#6,HW#3 WP#1 Reflection

The first steps I took in completing WP#1 involved activities in the text and online versions of The Bedford Researcher. They helped me to explore and narrow my topic, identify my audience, and create a search plan. The checklists featured online were especially useful for me when I was ready to draft my proposal. The assigned Web readings and activities helped me understand context, rhetorical situations, and how to conduct peer reviews.
I am most proud of the fact that my peers were able to understand my proposal, with only a few suggested improvements. What concerns me now is remembering not to use first-person pronouns in my research paper. Even though I have a personal interest in the topic, I need to use facts and evidence to make my case.
Some things I tried to improve during this writing project were transitions between paragraphs, proper use of hyphens, and using concise sentences. My transitions are improving, but I should continue to work on sentence structure.
Course outcomes addressed in this writing project include writing for a specific rhetorical context, organizing writing to support a central idea, using appropriate conventions in writing, using feedback from peer reviews, and using appropriate technologies to generate, format and edit my writing. Based upon peer reviews of my writing, I think I achieved the desired outcomes. For the next writing project, I will also work on the course outcomes numbered 4, 5, and 6 on page 5 of the syllabus.

D#6,HW#2 Final WP#1

I submitted my final proposal to turnitin.com.
Digital receipt #52170299
You can view it on Google Documents.

D#6,HW#1 Reading Reflection

The information in Chapter 4 of Everything's An Argument helped me to understand the ways that I can use facts and common sense correctly in my researched argument. I need to be able to back up any claims or assumptions with facts if I want to be credible in my writing.
The explanations concerning evidence in Chapter 16 were also useful. Several types of evidence were presented, with clear examples and guidelines for what to record. Chapter 19 also offers many examples, along with guidelines for evaluating different sources, including a list of "Signal Verbs" on page 542. Using a variety of verbs throughout the final paper will enhance my writing and help reduce repetition.
Kathy