D#12,HW#5 Figurative Language

In place of the following sentence,

That is a lofty goal, but in reality, children are not mature enough to surf the Internet with no boundaries in place. I could try:

That is a lofty goal, but letting children surf the Internet without boundaries would be like handing over the keys to the candy store…children just are not mature enough to make good decisions about some things.

Another example:

Web pages are created at a phenomenal rate, and no software provider has the time or resources to evaluate every single one.

Web pages are created faster than a speeding bullet, and no software company can keep up.